I tried to think about that Shan needs to be behind Roxie. I wanted a little bit of perspective. I wanted to make sure it was clear that Shan was looking at Roxie (though I think Roxie, in my drawing, is not convincingly enough looking straight, right past poor Shan). I wanted to put a bit more space between the hair and the cheek. I feel like I watered down the lines of action.
That's good thinking.
ReplyDeleteI would add a subtle suggestion of the jaw where it meets the ear. (See my construction at the college blog)
The back of the cranium and the back of the jaw are 2 different forms
many cartoonists connect them all in one line, which is wrong.
The rest of the drawing is good
Thanks, John! I'll be correcting and posting a newer version soon!
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